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Hunter - Sketch commission by =Feyrah:iconFeyrah:

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:iconhunter-t-wolf: 's sketch commish. Sorry for the long wait buddy, the builders that are renovating the house we live in have accidentally cut the internet/phone connection last thursday and it just got repaired this monday. >__<
Experimented with perspective in this =)
Enjoy

One left to go.

Fey

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~LilPixieryn Apr 22, 2009, 9:36:50 AM
This style reminds me a lot of Balto (the animated movie). Whether you meant it or not, it's still a rather fun piece. The most front foot really makes the piece, defining the subtle lines contrasted with the deep shading. It also makes it look statue-esque, which is personally tricky for me to accomplish.

The only thing I would point out is that the teeth seem a little flat. Maybe thin the lines a tiny bit.

I really like the tail. It threw me off at first, then I found it really interesting. I like how it fades off into the background as if he is emerging from the mist.
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*dragonrace Apr 22, 2009, 5:55:38 AM
wow cool love the pose!

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~Leviso Apr 22, 2009, 5:59:34 AM
your perspective isn't bad.
the front legs look a bit chunky at the top though.
back legs and tail look great otherwise.
love the snarky expression on his face. :heart:
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~MinaoAkira Apr 22, 2009, 6:18:54 AM
Wow, amazing *-*
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~CrazyRodeoGirl Apr 22, 2009, 6:23:07 AM
Awesome! I love his facial expression!!

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*kimba16 Apr 22, 2009, 6:59:45 AM
WOW! awesome !!! I love the eyes^^ :wow:
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*Hunter-T-Wolf Apr 22, 2009, 7:06:16 AM
this is awesome! the front legs may be a little chunky, but the pose flows and has balance. I like your shading technique too- somewhere in between crosshatching and cellshading. its to a good effect :3

thank you!
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~darkw1ng Apr 22, 2009, 8:23:02 AM
Awesome darwing however the only thing that seems to make my eye twitch by looking at it is the right big chunky leg...Other wise every awesome indeed.

I always loved this kind of pose because it's all actiony like!

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~RoxLunaris Apr 22, 2009, 8:42:16 AM
Amazing! Good perspective!

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